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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: To Be Weak [EDITED]

    Alright, This is decent. I like the vividity in the description; it creates good tension. However, there were a few awkward sentences Never had I ever felt being with someone ...

    Dec 15, 2008


You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved
— GengarTheGhost